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Re: The Magic
He dances up on the stage Like his fingers moving on the frets. His right hand grips the pick As tight as the capo on the neck. His toe taps ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: But In My Head
Trust me, I writre way better stuff than this. This sucks, I know. It was spur of the moment. And the whole purpose of it ws to be simplistic and ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: But In My Head
The movements were the same, though at different speeds, but in my head, I was spinning in circles, Running, jumping, leaping, over and around everything in sight. It was nightime, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
I like the way this story is going. It has a very different, but yet very relevant, plotline. I want to know how the mother found out, how the father ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Hey Babycakes
Whoa, I did not expect the girl to be a vampire. I knew something was up, but not that. I would have liked to have seen a bit of a ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Girl Named Chicken
"You smell like hamburgers," I laughed into my boyfriend's chest as we greeted one another. I looked up into his positively gorgeous blue eyes that swam with insight. Reaching up, ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Understanding
Nice job Sam! The only thing I noticed was that everything moved incredibly fast, and when her mother first started to speak it was a bit awkward but you were ...
Oct 19, 2008
