AlyssaKyle

By the way, I know this is only the very beginning of the book, but if anyone has any suggestons for the title, I would greatly appreciate it. Tess gets ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! This poem has some real gems in it, but there were also a few spots that gave me some trouble. "With eyes not of ...

Hello there! I must say, I really enjoyed this poem. I was a little worried when I saw how it was set up, but the flow was perfect. The rhyming ...

Hello there! You have quite the interesting poem here. I love the first line especially, and then in the next, I want to know who this girl is. Is she ...

How do you always have so many reviews when I get around to your stories? Oh yeah, becuase your writing is awsome, that's why! I think it is fine that ...

Prologue Stupid flat hair. Stupid pointy nose. Stupid stubborn tear lying stagnant on my cheek. Why can’t it just roll down the rest of my face and splash onto my ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews! The toes were pink because they were getting sunburned, and the reason I talked about more than one concept was because they were all ...

The sun drowns out the words placed precisely across the page. They dissappear in the luminous rays, making the book nothing but black lines and curves, broken and scattered. I ...

Hey there! And welcome to YWS! Wow. I really liked this poem. I wish I could have been able to write that well when I was twelve! The theme of ...

Hello there! Hey, your friends has the same name as me : ) When I saw the description, I thought it was about suffrage and all that-just goes to show ...

Hey there Kris! I really liked this poem. I love how you weren't afraid to play with the rhyme scheme by throwing in the parenthesis. You certainly tackled the mindset ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! Okay, to the reviewing part of today's program. Unless the wind has a specific religion, you might want to change 'gentile' to 'gentle'. : ...

Hello there! Okay, so let's get to that review, shall we? To start, I'm sorry, but I didn't read the above post. My apologies if I repeat something. First off, ...

Hello there! How are you today? Okay, to the review. I'm not sure whether you specifically set it up this way or not, but if you didn't, please throw in ...

I ORDERED MINE!!!!! But you already knew that. I got an e-mail saying that they shipped it. I'll have it in a few days!!! I'll bring it into school when ...