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Re: There's Something About Jerry
Because who these days can control a binge disorder? And the sad thing is , she doesn’t need those girls. We are , well we weren’t nerds…we were people doing ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Ghostly Aficionado chp 1
Not too much to criticize here. Your description in the story is a little weak...may I suggest looking through thesaruses or works from the Romanticism era to see some good ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
7/10 Cool robot-thing.
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: 1. The Beginning (Fixed up a bit)
:shock: Oh lord she's back, back I tell you! Alright, enough with the stupid stuff. I know I've read this at school but I am quite sure that I had ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: (Pirate Story--After Beginning) Chapter Two
I do believe all I see is this huge hunk of text that I cannot read. If it suddenly changes into a more readable form maybe I would consider to ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Smile
How can one simple upper turning of the lips completely disarm me? I do believe this is may favorite part of the entire story. The description in just this line ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: No Name # 1
Just thought I should point out a quick spelling error to you. It's a small one and probably just a key-stroke mistake. “Well no big deal I suppose, we’ll just ...
Feb 14, 2008
