AlphaGirl01

It was really good. But, I also agree with the two people who reviewed above me. It was a little long because you seemed to have posted it multiple times. ...

Absolutely FANTASTIC!!! This is just so enticing to read. I cannot wait to read part 4. You should definitely make this into a book. I would so read it. You ...

It was a very interesting second part. This part had even more of a romantic aspect than the first part and I was even more drawn in than before. You ...

Wow. I found this piece very hard to look away from. You really drew me in with the opening paragraph. It was fantastic! Characters: You really had the Twilight characters ...

Hey, it's Serena. Let's get started with the review. CHARACTERS:Evy does seem like a very interesting character. She's kind of the suffro in silence type, but still has friends she ...

When I'm with my friends We have a lot of time to spend Laughing at each others jokes Talking and drinking diet cokes. Having fun at sleepovers Giving each other ...

This was the second story I wrote that wasn't for a school project. I stood there, still as I possibly could, light shining through the trees. The yellow light scattered ...

This story may be a little long, but it took me a while to write and was actually the first fictional story I wrote that wasn't for a school project. ...

Very interesting. This story gives you a whole new point of view on the 'live life to the fullest' perspective that not a lot of people have seen before. It ...

This really is a well written poem. It really shows that you care about your friend and vice versa.

After reading the first few lines, I really began to be reminded of Serena from Sailor Moon and how Darien broke her heart. It was a very good poem.

“I don’t understand why Dad had to build a hotel in Michigan. I loved our house in Florida.” I said while I organized some blue hibiscus in a vase. My ...

Very detailed. But at certain points, I felt that there was a little bit of confusion. It seemed like you were switching your point of view from 1st to 3rd, ...

Your intro was very good. Good detail. There are a few typos here and there. At certain points, I felt sort of confused, like who she was talking to. But ...