AlphaGirl01

I was just a lonesome writer before I found out about YWS and I absolutely love it now. I only found out about it in June. It's probably in my ...

I have another story for you to review! It's 6K+ words and it mentions Aimee Cullen. I'll post a link. Here it is. Hope you like it!

“Holly comes up with the craziest things,” I stated after I finished her note. She had written that Tally Hall actually was a group of mythical creatures. “True. I doubt ...

I wouldn't say this is one of my best stories, but I decided to post it anyway so I could get reviews to improve it. I know it needs a ...

That sounds like a really good idea. I would definitely read it.

Here it is:

Hey, AlphaGirl here! You can probably guess what I'm going to say. Utterly fantastic! Although I did manage to catch two errors. After a few moments, I pulled gently away ...

Can you review my poem Me & My Friends? No one has written a review for it yet.

I loved this. I especially loved the romantic aspect of it. You really showed her love for Edward and vice versa. I did spot one grammatical mistake though: Edward looked ...

“Serena?” An unfamiliar but calm voice called out to me. I groaned. I couldn’t open my eyes. “Serena?” The voice called out again. Suddenly, I fell back asleep. I woke ...

Hey, Evi. I loved the ending. It's something you wouldn't have expected, but still a very good ending. Plus, I also love the way you wrote the story. It was ...

This was a very interesting story. The girl seemed to have a very good relationship with the bartender, but with the normal awkward moments you would find in their kind ...

Awesome, as usual. Thanks for the shout out by the way. You stuck with the plot you were aiming for in this one. I loved the ending, too. It seemed ...

Oh. My. GOD. That was simply amazing! You really were able to show her love for her "family" in this part and it nearly made me tear up. It was ...

That was absolutely fantastic! I definitely cannot wait to read the last two parts. You are an utterly fantastic writer and definitely should keep writing more Twilight fanfiction. You have ...