AlphaGirl01

I know I'm a bit late on reviewing this, but I just happened to venture upon it and I think it's pretty good. I've seen a couple of grammatical mistakes, ...

This story was...amazing! I agree with Evi (hi, Evi!) with you abruptly changing the subject to music. My suggestion is maybe say something like this: It reminded me of the ...

I'm sorry that this one's so long. On Word, it's nine pages. I thought I would post it since you guys (as in people who read this) liked it when ...

Hey, AlphaGirl here. Let's get started with the review. “What are we doing Sammy?” Sunlight streams through the window, it’s noon. Delete the comma and replace it with a period. ...

I loved this! From beginning to end, it seemed fluid. The awkward pauses seemed kind of... I don't know the right word besides realistic. There were really no spelling or ...

To whoever asked if this was going to be a novel, in a way, it is. I just didn't have the patience to make it longer than what I am ...

Love this ! I really want to read more. I think the first person who posted pretty much did cover the grammatical errors. I think you did absolutely wonderful! Please ...

This story was...wow. Amazing from beginning to end. The only problem I had with it was in the beginning I thought it was being told from a girl's point of ...

“Annabelle, my water just broke,” Aimee shouted from the bathroom. “Are you sure?” I asked. “Well, it’s all bloody and I just peed for, like, ten minutes.” It was the ...

The next day, I drove Aimee to the appointment. While in the waiting room, Aimee filled out the forms, and turned them in. A few minutes later, we were called ...

Hey, sorry I haven't been on and reviewed anything, but I'm back. This is another story that I absolutely love. The thing that I recommend is to not repeat the ...

The next morning, I awoke to Aimee jumping on my bed. I checked my alarm clock. “Come on, Aimee, it’s only ten a.m.” “You don’t think I know that?” She ...

This is the first story I've posted in... months! I hope you like it. Scratch that, I hope you love it! I worked very hard on it. “Annabelle, come on, ...

Sorry, it's been forever since I've posted. So, here you go. We sat in our dignity On the living room couch He on the floor in front of me I ...

Okay, so this is the sequel to the last story I submitted, Under the Moonlight. I hope you guys like it. I sat writing in my journal about becoming a ...