AlmondEyes

i agree with ignatius, that wuz disturbing. i thought the 1st stanza wuz funny, but the others kinda made me wanna take a shower.

to tell you the truth i thnk it's kind of bland. i mean yea, the story's there,but that's just it. i ddnt feel like it had any emotion in it. ...

ur poem wuz good,but it needs more

ur poem wuz really crazy. i thought it wuz really good. keep writing girl!

u thnk it's a good 1st try, but you could still use some wrk

ur poem wuz good and i hope u write more!

srry i meant to say really good

wow i tthought ur poem wuz really god and hope to read more!

i thought ur poem colud use a little more description, but it was good and i will give you my props. keep writing

i read your poem and it made me smile. wether that was your intent or not i don't know, but keep writing.

i read your poem and thought it was pretty good. i also hope you gat a chance to read my poem when i submit it.

i read your poem and thought it was pretty good. i also hope you gat a chance to read my poem when i submit it.

i read what you got and thought it was pretty good. too bad violet has to die. i'd rather it was that bitch lydia. and one more thing. why did ...

Chapter 1 Luna Life can be hard when you live in a town like Haven. Life is like baseball, I guess you could say. Then, if like me, you don’t ...

Well, i liked what i read. You did a good job on it this chapter except for the mistakes and i hope read to read more somtime soon.