AlmondEyes

ur poem was good so keep writing!

ur poem was awesome,so dnt stop writing. will u look @ a poem of mine? i just posted it and i need fresh eyes to take a look at it. ...

I like ur poem the flow was easy,simple, and sweet. keep writing!!

damn boy yo make me wish i had freckles!! this is a sweet and beautiful. the flow was nice as was what u were using in comparison to her and ...

ur poem was good so dnt stop writing them. will u take a look at my poem? its under narrative poetry and the name is nothing friendly, nothing pleasant. keep ...

i hav to agree with them. it was nice,but it does need more

i agree with what they say. just stay true to urself and always look towards the light when u need it. and as for where ur poem belongs, i thnk ...

i liked ur poem. it made me wonder how i taste to myself and other people. keep writing!

i liked it, but i ddnt really get the point. what hppnd to her to make her an empty shell? how will things never be the same again? keep writing!

He came into my room while i was sleeping He woke me with a gentle touch to the cheek My eyes opened and i looked at him, but said nothing ...

it wus good.but you had alot of errors and i wuz confused on a few things. and plus what hppnd to the other version you had? i like that one ...

dude you seriously had me fooled! i though you were about to spill some deep dark secret and all it wuz wuz you eating a donut! i busted out laughing ...

i can tell you right now ur poem is one of the best poems i've read all day, and wat you said about luv iz true. one thing that makes ...

ur poem wuz random and i liked it. keep writing!

i agree with ignatius u had me pretty confused on a couple of things in ur poem, but keep writing!