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Re: Right In The Face
this is my first time posting a short story so be nice. I know i didn't spell all of the words correctly, so take a read and i hope you ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Dude, i totally giving you my kudos in this poem. it was wonderful!! I hope you burn in Hell with Satan standing beside you. i thought that was awesome! i ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: KILL (part II)--contest entry
yo man this was awesome!! you did a great job on it!! the beginning was a little slow, but man didi it pick up in the end!! i tjought the ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Twelve
Heyo!! i just read a chapter of your work and i hav to say bravo!! to tell you the truth,this is the 1st of your work i've actually read. i'm ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
I've never been on a camel, I've never owned a nuclear weapon. I don't own a bulletproof vest, I don't bomb random communities. Yes I pray five times a day, ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Swagger
your poem, for lack of a better word is... interesting. and what's a weeble?
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
your poem was pretty awesome so keep doing what you're doing.
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: KILL--contest entry
and also you freakin' ROCK!!! woo!! and i cant wait for more.
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: KILL--contest entry
Dude, all i have to say is WOW. you did an awesome job on this. there wasn't one moment when i was bored or anything. but i will say that ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: In The Night
this is the first poem i've posted on lyric poetry, and to tell you the truth i don't even know of it belongs here, so just be gentle about what ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Colours
your poem was powerful and thoughtful, so keep writing.
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: the last words
you poem made me feel... a little sad but at the same time made me smile. my fav part was Too late to speak, I'm growing weak, I must be ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Smile (Contest Entry)
i liked your poem. it was bubbly and cute!! keep going!
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Alone
i agree with your poem all the way too. it was great and don't change your poem bassed on somebody's opinion. you wrote your poem the way you wanted and ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
i find your poem to be very funnyand well written. the flow was nice and i like the part about the cellulite Please buy some decent clothing that's in your ...
Jun 14, 2011
