AllyGrLxOX

HELLO YWS! :D I joined YWS over the summer but didn't really do anything...pssshh. Well that's over now! :) I am determined to write and review my heart away whenever ...

Hiya, AllyGrLxOx here for a review!(: I'll being with saying that this was a wonderful piece and would like to congratulate you on having wonderful descriptions! *applauds* I would like ...

Hey, AllyGrLxOx here for a review!(: This was a very enjoyable prologue! I'm anxious to see how the rest of the story unfolds. However I do believe that some more ...

Hey there! AllyGrLxOx is here for a review!(: I just want to begin with saying that anything I say is only to try and better your writing and your style! ...

Hey guys! :D This itself is a work in progress! More detail and emmotion will certainly be added, just as soon as I know if it's even worth pursuing! There ...

Hey there! AllyGrLxOx here for a review! :) I enjoyed this piece and am very intrigued with the direction your novel is going in! However you might want to get ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this piece and found it very humorous! :) I won't bother with grammatical errors... Keep up the good work! ~Ally~

Hello there, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! Well I'd like to begin by telling you that you have a great storyline so far, however it does seem a tad rushed. ...

This was great! :D except now I realize that in a hundred years or so everyone will have forgotten about me.... -_- lemme know when you have the next part ...

Heay! I really liked the flow of this and how you told the story! I know it's just an expert but it was still great! I would love to read ...

Hello there! :) Wow! I haven't read any of the previous chapters but your descriptions were just so vivid I might just have to! I really enjoyed all of your ...

Heaay, heaay heaay! Welcome to YWS! :D I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed this prologue and found it intriguing! I'm not going to nitpick your work for that's not ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I'm still kinda new myself and I love the site! :D I really enjoyed this piece and found the whole "Vampire Apocalypse" thing intriguing! ...

Thank you for taking your time to review this! Well she can hold fire because it's and fantasy novel and that's an element she can control! Sorry if the paragraphs ...

I stared at her gawking for a moment before she stared at me intently. “We won’t over work ourselves but the basics must be covered.” She pulled me out of ...