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Re: Metal Hearts
I thought Bree was at the campsite too....?
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts (starting, not accepting)
Could someone bring Bree in? Im kinda confused! :O
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts (starting, not accepting)
Bree: I sat inside our tent structure just waiting, Kaiter was right. We really shouldn't have stolen from the gas station, I mean we had metal plastered onto our skin! ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts (starting, not accepting)
Bree: I looked around at everyone that was gathered around the box of clothes sketptically. Some of them I thought I'd met before, but something was blocking all my memories. ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Anyone care for an "Awesome Ally Review?" xD
TabbyGirl-Done! Kafkaescence-Done!
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Forget the World~1
Hey there Tabby! It's Ally here to review as requested! Let me just say that I found this very enjoyable and easy to read! The flow was very smooth, and ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter One
Hey there, it's AllyGrLxOx here to review as requested! I don't have alot of nitpicks! Only a few that I think could use some editing! xD This whole piece was ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts (starting, not accepting)
Bree: I felt as if I had no air, like all the life was slowly being squeezed out of me. I gasped for breathe as I realized that I was ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts (starting, not accepting)
Sorry it's taken so long for me to post my profile! :P Name/Number: Bree #79 Age: 15 Robotic parts: Her legs are covered in metal which allows her to have ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Snatched
Hmm, I think I must apologize for posting such an awful read! xP I was simply needing to write somehthing, due to having writers block in regards to the novel ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Chapter One
You're very welcome, it was a pleasure to read! Well it would be very helpful if you could check out my novel; "Part of the Night" and give me your ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Chapter One
Hello there, Ally here to review! I haven't read the prologue so this review will be fully based upon chapter one! This has a very interesting take on a "communist ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: One thing
Hey there, AllyGrLxOx here to review! I'll begin by saying that if I come off as harsh I truly am not trying to, I'm just trying to help you and ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: The Power of Pop Secret
Please write more! I'm begging you! *Gets down on hands and knees* Please, please, please, write more! In Erik or Anna's POV, either works because both are filled with emotion ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Anyone care for an "Awesome Ally Review?" xD
Ilovebubbles123- Done! :)
Jan 4, 2011
