AllieTheWriter

Thank you VioletJune :D And the second and final part is up.

HA! Italics fixed! And thank you much Sionarama :D *devours cookie dough* For others that read and get confused: the large chunks of words in italics are flashbacks, and consequently, ...

Sorry about the non italics in the rest of the second flashback. BB Code is unreliable. >_>

I agree with ScarlettFire on this. It's elegant, and simple. The rhythm is very smooth, and the imagery is straightforward yet symbolic at the same time. Really good! -Allie

New chapter is up. Thank you so so so much for all the great reviews! I tried to apply them in the next chapter, please let me know if I've ...

This is something you have to read a few times in order for it to sink in completely, which is a good thing. Your descriptions are fascinating, and I envy ...

Doesn't EVERYONE want to be a Power Ranger?! Glad it translated into something a bit more realistic, though. :] I like it. Very honest writing. -Allie

For awhile, I thought it was puppets. So the ending got me a little. Well done, though, I liked that you kept your descriptions colorful, yet vague enough to keep ...