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Re: Know I'm Here(Prologue)
Ok I really like your prologue. It makes me want to read the rest of your story. I can't wait ti finish this so I can go read the rest. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2
Ok this chapter was really good. I love how you brought in Kaylie and that Tyler is her brother. You should have made he chapter a little longer but all ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
I like your story. Its pretty good but really cliche. It kinda makes you see the Hollywood life which I have no experience with so I wouldn't really know. This ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled Chapter 2
Ok I really like your story but you need some depth. Why does Addy love Jersey boys? How does the rest f her day go? What other classes does she ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Ok I really liked this chapter although I have to agree that it is a little choppy. You might want to stop telling and ztart showing a little bit more. ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Ok I really liked this chapter although I have to agree that it is a little choppy. I love how this story Katie normil and down to earth. I am ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Ok I really liked this chapter although I have to agree that it is a little choppy. I love how this story Katie normil and down to earth. I am ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 4-5
Hey sorry I havent posted in awhille but here is my next 2 chapters. Chapter 4 “So will you?” Jason asked before I could move an inch. “Yes, yes I ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 8 (part 1)
Omg why do you post in parts? You drive me insane. I just want to know what happens. I love your story and how there is some magic but not ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (Part two)
Omg. I am in love with your story. When she walked walked in on Liam and Lisa I gasped and almost screamed. Keep up the good work and keep writing. ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Ok really awesome chapter! It made me so mad when I got to the end. I am in love with your story. Keep writing and making everyone fall in love ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 6
Ik its official. I'm in love with your story. It has everthing that I love in storys. I love the emotion but also the suspense. I love how you make ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him *6*
Hey your story Katie really coming along really well. I am in love with it. Keep writing! I love how you are developing your characters and giving them substance. You ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Love Story chapter 1: Just the Begining
I love thids! Keep writing its aweasome!
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 5
This is really awesome! I love the unexpeected twist!
Jan 9, 2011