AllieMeadows

Hey everyone here is my next two chapters. I'm sorry I haven't posted in awhile but I was going through some tuff stuff. Well I'm now better and have found ...

Ok I really like your story. I am going insane wanting to know what happened to your MC. You might want to develop your characters some more though. This chapter ...

I love this story. I love the suspense of what happened. I like how you don't tell everything that happened. I can't wait to read your next chapter. You really ...

Ok I really like this. I'm just gettint back into writing after a tuff week. I really do like this but I wish it was longer. I really do like ...

Ok I like this story but it seemed to be quick and not explain much. You should have more detail. I lie that you have a ot of dialogue but ...

Omg I really like this story because I can connect to it. I understand the pain that you are going through. I love the emotion and the pain that your ...

Ok this chapter was really good. This story is so amazing because I have a connection to it because me sister became pregnant when she was a teenager. You are ...

Ok here is my next two chapters. I hope ya'll enjoy. :) Chapter 6 My afternoon classes were perfect that day. After every class Jason was waiting for me to ...

Omg this is the most intense story I've ever read when I realized Emma was dead I seriously started crying. I am wiping tears off my face right now. I ...

Omg I am in love with this story. The ending is amazing and makes me believe that they might be able to work through their fight. I love the raw ...

This chapter was really good. I love the emition behind it. I love the lost and heartbroken feeling I got when I read it. I think you could have combined ...

Ok I really loved this chapter. It caught my attention and made me want to read more. You have very good descriptive language something I struggle with ao I envy ...

Ok I really like your story. The description of places and events are better with less emotional description it makes it more understandable. I still got a little confused. The ...

Ok not to be harsh but this chapter seemed very long. It was kind of hard to follow and not as believable. It sounds as if a girl is narrating ...

Ok I really like this story. I was a little confused in the beginning but as the story progressed I understood it better. I think the beginning is very fitting ...