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Hi, WOAH! Caroline is trying to steal her man?! Oh, hell naw! Haha, I LOVE THIS!!! It is so well written it makes me want to cry...*Sniffles* It's just so ...

Hi, I thought his name was Bernie?! Not Brandon. I could've sworn I saw Bernie in Chapter One. Anyways, I really like this. While there were many errors, it was ...

Hi, Hello again! Shall we get started? Uh, there was much confusion here for me. I just figured out what the mother's age is. You added description. which is good, ...

Hi, Okay, a few things. First, I would just like to say good job. You drew me in almost immediately. I am curious to see what happens. Uh, there were ...

Hi, What. The. Hell. Is. Going. on. Was anyone able to follow this? I mean I followed it just fine, but what? How is she a conqueror, why is Iluve ...

Hi, While I totally agree with Iluve, I still think the things she did were mean and uncalled for. She should have tried talking to Solea first. I totally understand ...

Hi, Evil witches, bastard children, and creepy little girls.... Bye bye, daddy. Uh, there were many mistakes. Grammar, mostly. I do not see how this chapter is disturbing. That's okay, ...

Hi, Even with the many errors there are, it is still beautiful and precious! I absolutely adore this chapter. I relate to all of this so well. I feel, like ...

Hi, ........OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS!!!! THAT WAS DISTURBING!! I'm like, "Sweetie, you are not hurting him. You are giving him sexual pleasure." Haha. I'm like, oh god. I put discriptive ...

Hi, Awwwwwww! That's awwwww! I have very few things to say for this one, especially because I wasn't really looking for errors. There were, however, grammar mistakes. Also, what did ...

Hi, AHHHHHHH! MUST KEEP READING!! The poor baby girl! Solea has captured my heart! I worry every second if she is going to be okay. She almost seems real, but ...

Hi, Oh, Snoink! You've done it again! Very good!!! This was sooo sad! It made me question things in there. Like, why didn't Euro come back? Closer to the beginning, ...

Hi again, The diary entries have certainly gotten longer!! I love how you had Eurodities tell stories! That made me laugh so hard, i actually sounded quite mad! How does ...

Hi friend, Okay, a few things here! You kept saying 'I told.... this' and it got rather irritating. She said daddy a lot too. I personally do not like her ...

Hi, I was looking forward to this, but I started reading and got confused!!! I didn't know who the man was, his connection with Lucy(Sister, mom, wife?), what happened to ...