Alliaaryn5665

~No Stranger To My heart~ Even though I haven't seen you in awhile I remember you clearly I remember your easy laugh, I shed tears over your soft smile Still, ...

Hi, OOOOOH PRETTY!!! I love glitter glue! Farewell, A.

Hi, Oh my. So, my war got to you? Mission successful. You are welcome. :] Farewell, A.

Hi, Well done! It was mostly an easy, comfortable read. I liked it. It was sad, confused, and wonderous all at the same time. Maybe that's just me. There should ...

Hold on tight now To my hand I'll lead you through it You have to only trust me Eh, that's the worst stanza. All you have to do is tell ...

Hi, Oh goodness! I feel in love with these! Thank you for sharing! You brightened my day! I feel bad for the baby girl who gets picked on. He better ...

Hi, I am so proud that someone has had the guts to do this. I think you did very well[with the "Oh yeah!" being a nice touch.], though there was ...

Hi, Each one has their own flaws. Major and minor. I liked them, though! Good job! Farewell, A.

Hi, Wait, what? What's going on? I am so confused. I started reading this and didn't know what was going on. I still don't. It was good and all, but ...

Hi, Awwww giggling!!! Okay, I'm over it! Oh, and, OMG!!! I AM THREATENING YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, LOCK YOU IN A ROOM THAT ONLY HAS ...

Hi, There were a bit of mistakes here and there, but you did pretty well. Some grammar, I believe I saw a spelling, and a few other things. Make sure ...

Hi, So, yeah, keep writing. Don't read this, just write. There were many mistakes, a few typos, wrong tense, you get the idea. Instead of saing 'his name', you should ...

Hi, Uhm, this is kind of random, but can you review anything and everything you have time for? If you can't, that's fine. :] Farewell, A.

Hi, Job well done! There were, like, two mistakes. I think they were mistakes, but they could have been intentional. Anyways, good job. Your grammar and spelling were fine. I ...

Hi, This was immensly beautiful, but it would have been even more so if it was longer. There were very few grammar mistakes, but they were there. I believe I ...