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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (8)

    Hi, Evil witches, bastard children, and creepy little girls.... Bye bye, daddy. Uh, there were many mistakes. Grammar, mostly. I do not see how this chapter is disturbing. That's okay, ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (7)

    Hi, Even with the many errors there are, it is still beautiful and precious! I absolutely adore this chapter. I relate to all of this so well. I feel, like ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (6)

    Hi, ........OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS!!!! THAT WAS DISTURBING!! I'm like, "Sweetie, you are not hurting him. You are giving him sexual pleasure." Haha. I'm like, oh god. I put discriptive ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (5)

    Hi, Awwwwwww! That's awwwww! I have very few things to say for this one, especially because I wasn't really looking for errors. There were, however, grammar mistakes. Also, what did ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (4)

    Hi, AHHHHHHH! MUST KEEP READING!! The poor baby girl! Solea has captured my heart! I worry every second if she is going to be okay. She almost seems real, but ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (3)

    Hi, Oh, Snoink! You've done it again! Very good!!! This was sooo sad! It made me question things in there. Like, why didn't Euro come back? Closer to the beginning, ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (2)

    Hi again, The diary entries have certainly gotten longer!! I love how you had Eurodities tell stories! That made me laugh so hard, i actually sounded quite mad! How does ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (1)

    Hi friend, Okay, a few things here! You kept saying 'I told.... this' and it got rather irritating. She said daddy a lot too. I personally do not like her ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Dear Lucy: Prologue

    Hi, I was looking forward to this, but I started reading and got confused!!! I didn't know who the man was, his connection with Lucy(Sister, mom, wife?), what happened to ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)

    Hi, "You have anymore of those sandwhiches?" BAHAHAHAHAH!!!! That was my favorite part! Oh my goodness!! Uh, there were many grammar mistakes. Like, a lot. I liked this. On to ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)

    Hi, "You have anymore of those sandwhiches?" BAHAHAHAHAH!!!! That was my favorite part! Oh my goodness!! Uh, there were many grammar mistakes. Like, a lot. I liked this. On to ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Day In, Day Out

    Just knowing that I'm not good enough Just tears me apart Just destroys me I don't want to Live this life if I'm not good enough For anyone I try ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wish

    I wish I wasn't always so numb I wish all my smiles weren't a mask Weren't fake I wish all the laughter at my humor woukd still be there But ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Depressed- why try?

    Hi, You say shit alot. All too relatable. FTW! Farewell, A.

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bunnies Are Evil

    Hi, Oh, by the way, my previous review was my way of saying you did a fantastic job! :] Few mistakes, but that's okay! Good job! Farewell, A.

    Jun 24, 2011


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