Alliaaryn5665

Hi, I enjoyed this very much! I can not wait to read more, if there will be more. It has me guessing as to what will happen. I adore how ...

Hi, I absolutely love this! I though I would use the whole poem to review, so here goes: Cruising on a river of air Searching for a tropical paradise He ...

Hi, Wow, uh, I have some things to point out so I'll just use the whole poem. Here goes: One evening as I was going out for the party, I ...

Hi, Well, I saw some mistakes. Like, grammar and spelling. For example, it's YOU'D HAVE not you'd of. “What are you doing here?” he asked the girl “This place isn’t ...

Hi, You are fantastic!! Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved this! Your vocab was impeccable, your flow was phenominal, and your rhyming was amazing! I aboslutely loved how you repeated ...

Hi, WOAH! Caroline is trying to steal her man?! Oh, hell naw! Haha, I LOVE THIS!!! It is so well written it makes me want to cry...*Sniffles* It's just so ...

Hi, Thanks for the reviews! My english teachers always got mad at me for doing the period at the end of a line with dialogue. They sid just let it ...

Hi, I thought his name was Bernie?! Not Brandon. I could've sworn I saw Bernie in Chapter One. Anyways, I really like this. While there were many errors, it was ...

Hi, Hello again! Shall we get started? Uh, there was much confusion here for me. I just figured out what the mother's age is. You added description. which is good, ...

Hi, Okay, a few things. First, I would just like to say good job. You drew me in almost immediately. I am curious to see what happens. Uh, there were ...

Hi, I must say, this is really good! I really liked it! It's a charming read. While I think chpt 10-15 fit in well, Ther are all very nice. Farewell, ...

Hi, What. The. Hell. Is. Going. on. Was anyone able to follow this? I mean I followed it just fine, but what? How is she a conqueror, why is Iluve ...

Hi, While I totally agree with Iluve, I still think the things she did were mean and uncalled for. She should have tried talking to Solea first. I totally understand ...

Hi, Good job. Farewell, A.

Hi, Good job! they look like paintings. :] Farewell, A.