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Hi, Haha, nice! One thing: Molly McCoys swore off all other boys at the reasonable age of 24. She forced a small smile as she walked down the aisle and ...

Hi, While I am my agnostic little self, I really liked this. You did amazing. A few things, though: But I was floating on the air. Though the funny feeling ...

Hi, I quite like these! They all seemed sort of... unique. Yet you see some like the first quite a bit. These were wonderful. Thanks for sharing. I do have ...

Hi, Good job! Though, I do have to say, I don't really like the first paragraph. It wasn't very strong to me. The last line, also, didn't do much for ...

Hi, You could almost see this situation. You did a phenominal. One thing, though: Hugs were just hugs, smiles were just smiles, and hellos were just hellos. Neither one meant ...

Thanks so much servant4christ for this idea! I'm sorry if it isn't good, I am just kind of typing what comes to mind. I'm also brain dead because I am ...

Hi, AHHHHH! Nu-uh!!! He remembered her! :D Eeeek! I'm not even the romantic type and this made me keep reading as if it would save my life! Oh my goodness! ...

Hi, Oh my goodness, I loved this! While it wasn't suspenseful or creepy, it was psychological. I liked this a lot. I wish you would keep going. There were a ...

Hi, There were some typos! But that's okay! Good job! Farewell, A.

Hi, OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY! And aww. That's sad. How disappointing for her! It makes a story, though! One nitpick: I cut him off with by pu

Sorry it's so short! Janice was running through the forest, trying to catch her breath as she frantically glanced behind her shoulder. She didn't see the man anywhere amoung the ...

Hi, Sorry, but what the hell is this. I could barely understand this, let alone want to. You didn't capture my attention. You might have if everything was spelled out. ...

Hi, Personally, I adored this. While you could have made it longer with detail, you really didn't need to. Hands met throat; grip the last thing needed. “Come out come ...

Hi, Oh my goodnss! I love this! It is brilliant!There were many gammar mistakes. For example: His body was now that of a professional wrestler. Corded veins of muscle ran ...

Hi, While I really didn't get what was happening most of the time, this was cute, funny, and weird. I liked it, though it needs work. Oh, and what do ...