Alliaaryn5665

Howdy, SO close, yet so far. Not quite understandable. Yet simple. Hmm, makes you think. Maybe too much? I don't know, honestly. I read it a few times, and I ...

Howdy, Soooo many mistakes. I mean all over the place. It was little hard to follow, and at times a bit immature. Don't put "'do it'" put sex. Sex. Not ...

Howdy, Wanna know what's super funny? I am a member of the actual PETA. I cracked up; aka you crackled me up! I loved this so much, especially the ending. ...

Wrote this a few years back. As I sit here, Wanting no less than to scream, Scream loud for all to hear, I realize I am almost at peace With ...

Howdy, First off, I didn't finish this. It was WAY too all over the placce. It felt so forced and scattered, panicked. I guess maybe that was the feel you ...

I roam this desert land, Looking for a sliver of humanity. I'm lost here, No way to get home. Maybe this is home. My mind was banished here Along with ...

Howdy, I love you for writing this. Haha, is that weird? Oh well. Hurry! Farewell, -A.

Howdy, To make this thing perfect, you need to make a gigantic change. THE ENDING. This ending, in a blunt choice of words, stinks. Your poem was so powerful, so ...

Petals falling hopelessly, Crying, Their tears are made up of sticky dew. Screaming their pain out, They just lost themselves. The one that supported them, Their base and home. Those ...

Bonsoir, I felt the character's distress when her mom left for her flight. My mom went on a long vacation and never called. As mentioned in an earlier review, I ...

With blood hammering through my veins, Thoughts pressing against my brain violently, And irritated eyes, I shiver in a corner of my room. I finally cracked. My sanity has finally ...

Any suggestions on how to clear it up?

I don't know. I walk across this empty land, Eyes drifting across a motionless sky. My breath is loud against the night, Coming out in puffs against the chill air. ...

Howdy, Please hurry. Love, A.

I didn't breathe when I read this.