Alliaaryn5665

Adults and classmates Are always saying Trust your family Trust your friends It's not that easy If your family screams at you all the time Abuses you all the time ...

You'd think After all my fights and struggles That I'd get stronger But I am not I am getting weak and frail So much that the wind could blow me ...

Hi, Congradulations! For the first time outside of school, that was quite impressive! You should continue writting. This stanza: "Please tell me I'm the only one Or else my heart ...

Hi, Grammar alert! Have you forgetten the rules of English? I do that sometimes too. There are some serious spelling errors! You spelled dying wrong and a few other things ...

Hi, First thing's first! Uhm, you forgot some words, but, hey, it happens. Kind of choppy to me but that's just me. I think it was really good. Though, I ...

Hi, Personally, I think you should have played a little more into it. I started reading and was automatically confused. Who's he? What is a "Freaker"? What are you? How ...

These are very impressive! Good job! The pictures were very clear and precise.

Thanks! I really appreciate that :]

I do not know you, yet I am very proud. I am proud there are writers like you in this word. Yes, the piece needs some work but overall it ...

Will you scream out for me, While you are dying? Want me there because I am far away? Because you miss me? Well, I do not believe you cared. In ...