Alliaaryn5665

Hi, What?! No capitalization whatsoever. No commas, spelling errors, sentences are too long, apostrophes. PAY ATTENTION!!! NO detail, and absolutely pointless. Was there supposed to be a lesson? How w

Hi. You forgot a few commas. Otherwise, good job. Farewll, A.

Hi, I love someone that was diagnosed with mild Asperger’s Syndrome. I know exactly what the character felt In the first part about people hardly noticing and stuff. There are ...

Hi, Get writing. Right now. Quit reading this and write. What are waiting for?! Go! Farewell, A.

Hi, Perfect and unique. Farewell, A.

Hi, First of all....... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. that was amazing! I can't believe that I just found this! I absolutely loved this. It was fantastic. Write some more. Some detail would've been ...

Hi, Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness, Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness. Oh y goodness. OH MY GOODNESS! I have fallen in love with this! There are a few ...

Hi, While I see where you were going with this, I can't help but to say damn. There are so many errors, it is hard to follow, there is hardly ...

Hi, Many errors. Keep trying. Farewell, A.

Hi, Good job! It felt like you were speaking directly to me! While I caught a few things, I hardly even recognized them. Almost completely perfect! Good work, and keep ...

Hi, Personally, while I find this somewhat true and relateable, I find this very rude and offensive. I think mayne you should have worded it differently. While I am not ...

Hi, Personally, to make this even more fantastic, you should have kept going!! You should not have just cut it off there. It feels like a surprise ending. Kind of ...

You try to stay sane While you hide the pain The hate Is what you try to rate You can never escape your fate When you arrive at the gate ...

Hi, Wow. Amazing. Just phenominal. I think I spelled that right..... Oh well. that was just unforgetable. You used power in your words. I read it probably 8 times haha. ...

Hi, I didn't even have the power to finish this. I am sorry. The first few sentences were a mess. You could have easily combinded them for stonger sentences and ...