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Hi, I am confused about this poem. Farewell, A.

Mikayla, Thomas, Tammy, and Zeke stepped into the silky twilight from underneath a canopy of their favorite restraunt, The Mystic, which is a vegan restraunt. They had gone there for ...

Hi, I just realized that I've stumbled upon this before! Oh my! I do, however, have some critiquing to do. The poem could, overall, stand without the first two lines(stanza ...

Hi, I would first like to say that I really enjoyed this. I don't think that the first line fits in, let alone flow, with the rest of the poem. ...

Hi, Honey, epilouges are at the end. :] Prolouges are at the beginning. Farewell, A.

Hi, Very few mistakes. Please keep writing. Farewell, A.

Hi, Oh, my friend, you must hurry with that part 2. :] Haha, excellent! Uhm, a few grammatical errors and capitalization, as well as punctuation. Otherwise, it was perfect! Good ...

"That's it! We are over!" Camden screamed at his girlfriend, who had apparently been cheating on him for the last four months. "Fine! You know what; he is a better ...

Hi, This is a brilliant idea. Good job! The format is phenominal, but the punctuation is iffy. You repeated secrets in stanza four which was unnessasary. Near the end there ...

Hi, This is really good. I don't personally like how you arranged it. Otherwise, there are no errors. Farewell, A.

Hi, On line six, stanza one, you said 'has went', which is a grammatical error, you should change it to either 'has gone' or 'have went'. I really liked lines ...

Tonight I am alone Not only am I the only one here But I feel solitary too Maybe it should've stopped Maybe it should've ended Before all this Maybe your ...

I was inspired. Sorry if it isn't good. "So, Josh, how was your day?" Maria said to the boy on the other line "It was whatever. I saw you walking ...

Hello friend, Bravo. This piece really teaches a valuable lesson and can actually give someone a confidence boost. You are 100% right about how society labels people and also how ...

My heart broke At approximately six o'clock In the morning I knew that I severly Wished for death I wish for it all To end I wish I had never ...