AllHopeEclipsed555

It makes sense if you understand all the metaphors. Although I probably shouldn't of made the entire poem based on the last line (I don't know if that makes any ...

Massive sacrifices to gloomy skies Offer deception at fingertips Of the wicked and shameful Metallic operas Pervert the sewer’s angels Flying with clipped wings Truth the beautiful wraith Blends wit

Thank all of you, I will consider your suggestions. lol I just made myself sound intellegent ^_\\

Wings of angels are Rived by ravens Out of pure sport. Songs of children are Writhed by writes Of a poetic sort. Hopes of futures are Contorted by counts In ...

I remember when you had me read this in Albin;s class...It's good...

Right now, you're describing someone who is evil No, I'm not...I guess it could come off that way if you read it out of context. If that were the case ...

i dont like blurting out the meaning either, but i don't think i had much choice...*sigh* thanks

Wow. I feel dumb...Um...I knew that was rhetoric...I swear I did.....LoL :D thanks for the advice

Yes I will...Okay, it is basically saying that someone's ready to reveal Christ for what he really is... I went to go "Edit" my post and it wouldn't let me ...

This is my favorite of all of your poems! :lol: The last two lines are the best! Oh, by the way that site I want you to join is: Register!!! ...

Here I sit alone. My complete undivided attention fixed upon your stage. I have officially bestowed my heart unto you, But you don’t even know that I think about you ...

*Ignore my previous post* When did you write this?! Why wasn't I notified!? We're on the phone 24/7 and you never told me about this! *Laughs* Just kidding. I don't ...

Thank you, I like these harsh critiques you give. It makes me want to do better and such...I'm also starting to get nausiated by people who just tell you it's ...

lol...i was very period-happy in that i must admit! about the other stuff...i dont like telling people what my writing means, but what im trying to say is: I was ...

im gonna go through this as i read your comment: -giving human emotions to something not human is called "Personification" anyways, if u dont know already the poem is about ...