Aliceinhorrorland

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Thanks!

Thank you!! I definitely have to remember to describe more. And as for the name it was a play on the word telekinesis ahahaha.

Thanks for the tips!

Thank you for telling me. And yeah a few of those were typos %uD83D%uDE02

Thanks for the review! Sorry for the grim ending ahahaha...

Sorry, not reviewing. I just wanted to say I thought it said “Avacado” so I was confused for a minute there XD. Nice descriptions!

Thank you so much :)

Hello, thanks for reviewing! I guess the main character is kind of crazy, I know that her reactions were pretty strange. But I guess everyone reacts differently to things Lol. ...

Oh shoot, I didn%u2019t see me changing the tenses ahahahaha. Thanks for pointing it out. And I think I%u2019m going to change the %u201Cor in my mind%u201D to something else, ...

Thanks. And at the beginning, I said the grandma was in the hospital. And she didn%u2019t answer her phone later on, so I guess the character assumed the grandma was ...

Thanks for reviewing. And I kind of flunked with description on this sorry, ahahaha. I%u2019m trying to make description better in my future stories. But thanks for the suggestions :)

Okay I tried that, I think it fits better. Thanks for the tip

Thanks for your awesome review. I think you might be right about the last sentences, so thanks because I didn%u2019t notice that. You aren%u2019t bad at reviewing :)

Thank you for this review!! I also think that this story might need more details, and I hope to do that eventually. However, school takes up all of my time ...