AlicePhell

Aren't we all. I loved this, it hit straight to home and hit hard. Excellent job, keep going

Haha, I loved this. My ony question is the final number there, where did it come from? But the rest of it was awesome and very unique. Take that Moon.

Tanya, you are amazing. thank you very much for the review, I'll be working on these issues asap. I will divulge to you, that Lucifer becomes more than a haunting ...

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. I'm glad you like the story. I'll try to get other chapter up soon!

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm actually happy you pointed out things I didn't even think about, like Winnie's descrpition, that was cool. There are several ...

Other than some grammar mistakes (which let's face it, we all have) it's a pretty wicked story. I like the characters, and your introduction of Lee was awesome. It painted ...

Haha! Ok, I love the cussing. I think "Lucifer's cockles" might be my new curse lol. I'm very interested in this, it's very cute and the entertaining. I shall keep ...