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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Libraeon 2

    Chapter 2 As the sun broke through the opening in her purple curtains, Winnie turned over, and let out an agitated moan. “It’s Sunday,” she whined, “Sleeeeeeep.” She pulled her ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Character Names

    I always like a story behind the name. I use because you can type in a trait or occupation or something and you'll get names with that meaning or the ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Thanks for a very warm welcome, guys. I'm more than happy to be here with you all!

    Aug 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Inter

    I'll be honest, I actually had to check your age about half way through this. You got so much into the mind of the chatacer that I actually thought it ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: How could I resist.....

    Good to know I wasn't alone with that feeling of not being a "young writer." I think you'll be happy with the community. I just joined and already got some ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I get to do what now?

    Hey Everybody! I'm a newbie to the site, I said my hellos and such on the welcome mat, but who can resist talking about themselves to people who haven't heard ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Coming up with a character and thier story

    So, I have an account over on Yahoo! and I like to go into the Yahoo!Answers and give advise and such for pretty much anything. One of my favorite catagories ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Hello fellow aspiring writers! I've been online for a bit now, trying to get feedback on my stories (I'm on and Devaintart.com) but my friend pointed this site out to ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Man, just reading the welcomes to other writers I feel like I'm on the right site. Hey, everybody! I'm a newbie, just call me Alice. I've already started reading a ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Libraeon

    Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm actually happy you pointed out things I didn't even think about, like Winnie's descrpition, that was cool. There are several ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter two

    Other than some grammar mistakes (which let's face it, we all have) it's a pretty wicked story. I like the characters, and your introduction of Lee was awesome. It painted ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lee Reason

    Haha! Ok, I love the cussing. I think "Lucifer's cockles" might be my new curse lol. I'm very interested in this, it's very cute and the entertaining. I shall keep ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Libraeon

    Chapter 1 “We are gathered here today to give our final respects to the recently departed, Lucifer Vanson. Beloved son, brother and friend, we shall miss him.” The priest closed ...

    Aug 4, 2011


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