AlicePhell

I am very touched by your epiphany, it makes this a very strong topic for an essay. I caught like one or two spelling mistakes, but my spelling is much ...

Aren't we all. I loved this, it hit straight to home and hit hard. Excellent job, keep going

Hey Fred, welcome to the madhouse, make yourself comfy because you're gonna like it here.

Chapter 4 A warm autumn breeze blew in threw the old windows as the morning sun began to rise above the horizon. Winnie let out a slight moan as she ...

I'll admit that I was in drama and doing so I tend to act out my characters and imagine that they are around me. It puts them into situations that ...

Haha, I loved this. My ony question is the final number there, where did it come from? But the rest of it was awesome and very unique. Take that Moon.

Ok, to be blunt I am a redneck from a tiny town in New England, and am a northern country girl. American rednecking tends to include mudding in your truck ...

Hah! I like the line about the tree, that was perfect, and fits very well with the story you are building. I like that you took a chunk of this ...

I'll be honest: Pretty awesome, Paul. The title is great, it's like you have to read teh story, it's just that good of a hook. I love the introduction, it's ...

Hey there Sweetie, you can call me Alice. I congradulate you on your novel, I'm still working on mine. Jealous of your awesomeness I am. I'm a pretty new to ...

Chapter 3 Halloween finally came and Winnie was happy it was on a Friday night. She could stay up as late as she and her friends felt necessary and it ...

I'm my own genre. I write fiction, but stories usually include: fantasy, romance, action, mystery, humor, and tragedy. (Don't all good stories have multiple aspects?) My "prep" varies a lot ...

Tanya, you are amazing. thank you very much for the review, I'll be working on these issues asap. I will divulge to you, that Lucifer becomes more than a haunting ...

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. I'm glad you like the story. I'll try to get other chapter up soon!

Other than some grammar and spelling mistakes (which others have lovingly pointed out, so I won't do it again) I thought it was great. Maybe it's because I'm a film ...