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  • Archive Re: The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    Sara half vampire black hair green eyes pale complexion rosy cheeks 26 goes back and forth from protagonist to antagonist it just depends on what has happened and how she ...

    Apr 11, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    Sara walked down the busy street, looking very beautiful and as easy prey to anyone who would want to take advantage of her. That's what she wanted, she was hungry. ...

    Apr 6, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    I am sorry, I have read all the comments about new characters and I have no clue whats going on in the story, but never the less I am adding ...

    Apr 6, 2007
  • Archive Re: Which One?

    Marianne waited patiently as Jeff wrapped her foot up preparing it for a cast. She had never had anyone put a cast on her before and she assumed it would ...

    Apr 5, 2007
  • Archive Re: Which One?

    Jeff quickly changed his disposition to an optimistic doctor as she laid down on the table. Her blue eyes looked almost white beneath the angelic face that she had. He ...

    Mar 10, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    "I'm sorry Mrs. English Not just because of the class I missed the bus." She half ran to the back of the room and sat in her seat. She sank ...

    Mar 10, 2007
  • Archive Re: Which One?

    Her car had just blown up. He knelt gaping at the roaring fire for a moment. As bad as that was he couldn't help but think it was cool. Snapping ...

    Mar 10, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    The cut on her face began to sting. She wiped it off with the back of her jacket as she walked. She yelped as she tripped over a tipped over ...

    Mar 9, 2007
  • Archive Re: Which One?

    Marianne pulled open the living room curtain and blinked. It was noon and way too bright. She closed the curtain and turned on her T.V. there wasn't anything on. as ...

    Mar 9, 2007
  • Archive Re: Which One?

    Mind if I do the girl? Name- Marianne Age- 24 Hair color- Blond with natural white highlights Personality- fun loving coffee addict slightly cynical sense of humor never takes crap ...

    Mar 9, 2007
  • Archive Re: The perfect man

    "Interesting smile you got there," she said cynically. "Yeah, I just came from rehearsal." "Rehearsal?" "I'm doing a play." "Dracula?" He laughed and stepped back away from the door. Feeling ...

    Mar 9, 2007
  • Archive Re: The perfect man

    Since it seems to be in demand I'll give a description of Isabella - 25 -long naturally red hair -loves to play card games -6 foot -sea blue eyes ---------personality ...

    Feb 22, 2007
  • Archive Re: The perfect man

    alright this is to basically figure out who's Isabella's perfect match, with US yes us as the matchmakers. God have pity on her, with all the havoc we're bound to ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Archive Re: The tell tale heart, a vampire memoir

    "Well I still say you're a pervert." "That may be but at least I'm not a scary pervert am I?" "What are you doing out here this late? It must ...

    Feb 11, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Demon

    I could still remember those days bitterly. They shall haunt me forever, everything before I entered the forest was a blur, if even that. But I didn't care, I soon ...

    Feb 11, 2007


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