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Re: Love is So Unfair
When Colt walked her to her door later-after they had dropped Cole off-he had the urge to kiss her. "Hey Pippa," he said, she turned around to face him. "Yeah?" ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie I heard voices outside my room, and I reconized them as Senra's and Phil's. I wanted to go out and join them but I didn't really have the urge. ...
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Re: past tense vs. present tense
I like both, for my flash fictions I write in second person present tense, it's really refreshing. Most of my novels and longer projects I do in first or third ...
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Re: Abusing your Muse
Ever had a sudden spark of inspiration and wrote for 1-5 days straight giving your head a time to relax only when you sleep? This is what I call "abusing ...
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Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I would make comments but I was too busy laughing to think of anything. And I suck at scripts anyways. Lawl.
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Re: Tell Us The Last Thing You Said Out Loud
lawl I was laughing at a movie :)
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Re: Teenagers
Phil I looked at Senra when she hung up the phone, "what's wrong?" "Something's up with Annie, she's sick or soemthing and won't admit to it." "Colt ask us to ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie I nodded, "I'll call her when I'm in the cab." I kissed his forehead, "focus on getting yourself better okay? And call me if you need anything." "I will." ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie He smiled rubbing his chin, "you don't like me being fuzzy?" I made a comical face and shook my head, "not this level of fuzzy, its awkward." "Wait until ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie I finished chewing on my fry, "you should probably go back and lay in bed." He scowled, "No." "Come on," I said, "your legs will heal much faster if ...
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Re: Love is So Unfair
Colt waited for her to protest, he would let her go if she did. But never did it come. "Are you sure that it'll be fun?" she asked. "Yes, and ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie I was glaring at a doctor when Colt zoomed his chair into the lobby. "Colt!" I sqealed and ran over to him. "They wouldn't let me in." Colt chuckled, ...
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Re: Love is So Unfair
Colt climbed into his seat and helpped Pippa with her struggling with her belt before putting his on. "Frightened?" "Terrified," she said with a shaky laugh. He held out his ...
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Re: Teenagers
Annie We sat there for the longest time, then a nurse came out. "Visiting hours are over." Tears brimmed my eyes, I didn't want to go. "Please can I stay?" ...
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Re: Love is So Unfair
Colt and Cale locked eyes in the rear view mirror. "I think you two will get along," Pippa said trying to fill the awkward silence. "You've got a lot in ...
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