Alice

"We don't know anything about these creatures," Ishtar lied, "except that they are half breeds, not welcome anywhere."

They walked like that the whole way back, Sara just moved to the side a little bit to allow them to walk easier. "Greg we're getting soaked, can you make ...

9/10 coolio

Sara looked down at him for a moment, of course she could forgive him. But would she? He had killed fifty children for her, no she had to forgive him, ...

"You saved my life," Emily said, "I had to say thanks." Everyone else told of their reasonings.

I love being in your face with my writing, i don't even know how to do passive voice anymore.

or their language

7/10 cool!

4/10 confusing, whats that from?

Emily jumpped, she had been twenty one for an hour and had already been once again thrown into the magical realm. She had hoped to just wait out her birthday, ...

Weird, I cannot spell worth a crap but everyone who reads it ignores it. And for the love of god don't stop writing, if you're like me in this area ...

"A steady hand? God no, when I write my hand flies all over the page, which made it impossible for it to stay still." -Miranda Miller "Of course, when you're ...

granted but the fourm ends I wish I could wish up a good wish that wouldn't start with I wish I could wish up a good wish, that wouldn't start ...

because you defination of fluffy is very closed. *why can't I sleep?*

Looks really random, and hard to understand, sorry but 5/10.