Alice

Okay I give up. *Sighs* *Walks away from the thread* *Vows never to return*

ok I get it SPEW is just one of those things that you have to be in to understand, or its just a sick joke and really doesn't exist. (Sounds ...

Thanks Adam, all fixed :D

So what is SPEW exactly?

Again I ask what is Ccf?

What are your titles? Do they fit your story right away or do they not make sense until the end? Would they catch someone's eye? Or are they just another ...

Sour

Chapter one: How I met her Ayden's prospective When I saw her, sitting on a bench close to the cafe I was currently sitting in, there was no question to ...

7/10 funny

dream.This dream you need a space there. and again too short, if you're trying to make it easy for us to read, don't. Post you whole chapter, or half your ...

Only one sentence didn't start with "she" it made me wince. (sorry it did). Its also rather short for a prologue, so I didn't get what was going on. But ...

"My parents won't believe you have me against my will, we'll have to figure something else out." "Like what?" "Turn your freedom into a reward, not a ransom. If they ...

Alania woke in a comfortable bed. The room was flooded with light, where was everyone else? Where was she? Where were her weapons? How did she get wherever she was? ...

So what is Ccf?

basement lights sorry, we're never down there when they do it but you can hear the distinct click of the light switch going up and down up and down at ...