Alice

Oh jebus, thanks Dynamo I totally forgot to do that!!! *rushes to edit*

Those are cool. *is all she has to say*

I need critiques

Ok seeing as we just had a minor problem in the planning of the storybook I've decided to make a discussion thread about it, here we can make plans and ...

**Hey you guys I'm gonna create a thread that we can talk about this in, anyways I'm going to finish my thoughts** "Hello my dear sister." "Stop calling me your ...

The magic around Emily dissappeared, it was all in her. It had taken a long time, but if it hadn't happened like that it would probably been more painful than ...

"You're right," Ishtar said, "I don't understand. I don't understand how you could be so heartless!" Eryc snorted, "this from a vampire." "You forget Eryc, I have never killed out ...

Alice walked into the control room and shut the door. No wonder Adam loved this room so much, nobody ever came in here, they were always afraid that they'd push ...

*Wth? Firestalker-not cool, writersblock-worse*

Anger flared in Ishtar, "Eryc we don't know if they are a threat yet! Maybe they aren't! We can't just go in there with the audasity to assume that they ...

6/10

6/10 kinda cool

"Killing vampires" Rory "Stopping my wife from killing herself by killing vampires" Greg (Rory's husband) "Cliff diving" James Vampires? Werewolves? or dragons?

This one's hard to see, and she doesn't really look like she's crying, it looks like she just ran through a bush or something, but not that she's crying. It ...

Alice walks into her room and plops onto the bed, two more hours until the repairs were done. "Oh my god!" she realized and sat straight up. She needed to ...