Alice

Alania's hands trembled, her parents were relentless. They would do anything to make sure she was there to get married. Her gag reflexes took control of her at the thought ...

change to my first responce: i first started writing decently for my age was in 3rd or 4th grade. I've been writing for my whole life, even when i could ...

BELLAS TURN!!!

Ninen shrugged, "I don't know what I'm going to do. I know I don't want to go back to my mom, but I also don't want to go to my ...

Alice groaned and rolled over, chucking her pillow at bella and proping her head up with her arm. A sudden swirl of deja vu, came over her. "I'll talk to ...

"I'm not sure if my mom and me are good, I just don't want to go back yet, I think I explained it all before." "Care to do it again, ...

The thought about why such a dark creature came back disturbed Emily. "Maybe they didn't all die? How long of a life do these things have?" "You didn't pay attention ...

"Well," Ninen said, "I missed my train." "And I'm never going home again." They surprised him with their light and casual tones. "Are you going back to Ninen's house?" "No, ...

Ninen put an arm around her, letting her cry. She knew that soon they would be following them. "Riley," she said softly, "unless you want to be found again I ...

"Thanks" Riley said. "No problem, you really don't want to see them do you?" "If they died I wouldn't even go to their funeral." "Whoa, isn't that a little bit ...

If I had finished that, it would've been an info dump, I woulda gone on to describe trees, what the swamp looked like, what the nearby village was like, what ...

99% of the time they're bad, you can make them work if you're starting a chapter in a creepy place with one like... dawn slowly creeped over the edge of ...

5/10 interesting but... what?!!!

"Um... Acro, who's that?" she asked her voice shaking. "I'm an old friend Princess, you should remember me." "I don't." "I am the bounty hunter for the king and queen, ...

Gared fought the death sleep as long as he could, but soon it was too much. He leaned back in the chair and fell asleep, but not before making sure ...