Alice

oh yeah (i'm too lazy to edit the last one) and i was just tryin to see if it would work. *sigh* oh well.

**yeah and Mike can't get on the internet like at all, long story*

Alania looked on her shoulders and saw a little green thing sitting there. "Oh hello!" she said. "What's your name?" "I don't have a name, do you?" "Yes, my name ...

Sara's eyes became so wide she thought they would shoot out of her head, "that is brilliant!" she said too loud. Her babies started crying. After she calmed them down ...

5/10 cool but creepy How come everybody hates Avril Lavigne?

When the sun went down Minerva rose like her alarm went off. Instantly she went to the window and looked outside, she saw that werewolf looming around. "Go away!" she ...

"Wow, you picked a winner this time, mother." Adrian's arm stole around her, "yes, she did." "Now," Ishtar said, "what do you want with that girl?" Ziliah shrugged slightly, "she ...

Elizabeth woke a few minutes later and the hospital released her. She was so hyper she was shaking. Once they were out in the night air Gared held out his ...

Geomana walked into the kitchen and started cooking, Sano watching her admiringly. "My brother and I like our steaks rare, how do you like yours?" "Medium rare." "Good, we'll put ...

Hello?!!! no letting this dye!!!

As they walked Namarhie kept very close to Alania, he sensed some hostile feelings towards her. "What exactly is this place?" she asked Acro, "there is more to it than ...

Genieve looked at the clock and started. "Whoa, um.." she took a bite of her bacon, "I have to run, sorry." She grabbed her bag and ran out the door. ...

it just sounds dumb Shakesphere's Book of Sonets is my Bible.

Thanks for the help so far, I'm trying to find a way to get this published in Readers Digest! Wouldn't that be awesome? MM I hope I did a little ...

Color, and proportions. Work on those. Her neck's too big, but her dress is beautiful. His neck is just funny looking, but his shirt is cool. I insist that you ...