Alice

Wow! If you've expanded it already, do it again. Its too short. It probably wouldn't make a good novel but just make it longer, explain what the things are, more ...

If that were true, Georgia would need to know how to weild a sword. That presented a problem. "Yeron, I think I'm going to need to learn how to weild ...

"Um..." Bill said. "We don't really have one, either than stay inside, stay quiet and hope they don't find us." "We may be bounty hunters but we're not heros." "So ...

Eve quickly scurried away from Joseph and over to Corelle. She was shaking, that surprised him. He had never known her to be easily afraid. He had to be really ...

(Oh Joseph's that immortal dude i was talking about, i meant to put that in the other thread, oops!)

"I think you should put the hood on," Yeron suggested. Georgia did. The hood hid her well, but she found it harder to walk in the woods with it on. ...

Eve held her extream happiness until she was in the stairway. "Yes!" She threw her arms up in the air and jumpped down twelve steps to the bottom. finally she ...

When they got into the small house Bill and Kathy latched the door shut. They went around doing the same to all the windows and the back door. Everyone else ...

Georgia turned to her grandmother, "grams whats-" "shh... you've got your mothers spirit, and you know her." "She'd be fine in any situation." "And so will you, watch yourself out ...

Alice watched as a seventh year and Madam Pomfrey bustled around making something. She was still freezing, and started rubbing her arms trying to stop them from going numb, as ...

They stayed like that for a while, and it became slightly akward. Eve finally got the nerve to break the hug and went over to the boar demon, and took ...

Awww... I suck at poetry but so I'm not even going to attempt to critique it. I'm just going to comment... Awwww.

"the holy grail of stickey stuff" -modern marvels.

*jumps on bandwagon* yes-er-e-bob they are.

Flashfic right? Well, make it a real story. I want to read the whole thing!