Alice

Alice gawked at Bella and pulled her back, "are you compleatly mental?" Bella shrugged, "I'm best friends with you aren't I?" "Okay let me rephrase that, 'are you sucidal?'" "No." ...

Ariana and Arias didn't greet Daklana and Zire the way the others did, they simply smiled all-knowingly and turned their backs to them. Smiling triumphantly to themselves.

"what the hell was that?" Alice demanded as arm and arm her and Scipio pulled themselves to their feet. (Thats all i can think of...hope it helps somebody)

Bill didn't get a chance to answer, he slammed on the breaks, launching all of them foward. "Everybody get your guns and point them out the window," he mumbled. "Why?" ...

Geomana hugged Rei, "if he's hoping to have you keep an eye on me you won't be disturbed for long, we were just about to go home for lunch. I ...

Alice fell asleep on a couch in the common room, grateful that nobody was awake when she got back. They would try to get her to talk, and her bad ...

It was well after midnight when Alice finally made her way back to the common room. Her hair was still messed up, she went back into the woods after tea ...

" reparo ," Alice muttered at the tree, Hagrid wouldn't be too happy if she kept blowing up trees. So she wandered deeper into the woods so the noise wouldn't ...

Sara was dozing off on Greg's chest, when she realized something and laughed, making Greg jump. "Whats that about?" "I just realized something," Sara said not giggeling anymore. "What?" Greg ...

Ash gripped her elbows to stop her from falling compleatly. "Oh hey Alice," he looked her over, "are you alright?" "I'm fine, currently trying to re-gain my balance but other ...

OOO coolio... Whats a Shiva?

I had one of those in my hair today (exceedingly random). Then you should put chapter one at the top, people will mistake it for a short story.

So it wasn't the ending? It sounded like an ending a BAD ending but an ending none-the-less.

1) spell check 2) Why did her paper catch fire? 3) Well that ending didn't resolve anything did it? 4) Details, expansion, all that happy stuff 5) What about Will's ...

Geomana latched herself onto Sano's arm as they continued up to the hole for the outer city. When they had exited and found themselves in the sun Geomana took in ...