Alice

Heylo newb! I'm Alice and I'm in! (Beware I am a hopeless romantic) Name: Alice Race: human Age: 17 Orentation: Guys duh! Eyes: Gray Hair: shoulder legnth, origionally blond, but ...

Caiden slowly opened her eyes, where was she? She looked up and saw a vampire hovering over her, she couldn't quite make out his face but it was a vampire ...

*I can't think of a way to wake her up, could you help mabel?*

Sudden screams and shrieks of pain split the silence that part just seems a tad akward to me... dark eyes sizzled with fury love the termonology right there. on the ...

Lets see, I won't be getting around to the general aspect of things near the end, I'm starting off with flow and such now. Service [s]had[/s] ended a while ago ...

"Hey...Where's Sara and Kate and all them?" Alice asked, "they should be here by now." "I don't know," Jesse admitted. "Hm... Thats strange." Alice started feeling around in her pockets ...

(OY! Connor! Frenchy! Bella! Somebody post! Dona let this die!)

I still say this is one of Nate's Tolkien* ideas! *Tolkien idea: based on Tolkiens lord of the rings series meaning brillant

Excrutiating pain filled Alise, she withered and screamed at first but then just gritted her teeth and groaned. Any other time under such extream pain she would have passed out, ...

It's a wonderful thought and all, but as a "short story" (As I am assuming that is) its really bad . It's written wonderfully and all, but it would do ...

I added some more detail to the end! Just to let you people know!

Thanks guys! I'm going to be turning this in for part of my Narritive Essay in my english class so any constrctive critisim is much appreciated!

"I'm Alaniata, but I hate it with a passion so I order anybody who'll speak to me to call me Alana. I'm the misfit among misfits." "The what?" "This is ...

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This is the third and final short story in my "forever" series/novella, now you won't have a clue whats going on unless you read the first two. I could talk ...