Alice

Caiden stood standing in the middle of the kitchen feeling very akward, she was grateful when Will came and put his arm around her shoulder. "Maybe some memories will help ...

Caiden felt a little remorse when she saw the look on Will's face, jelousy flickered across it followed by what looked like hatetred as he glared at Colt. She hoped ...

Caiden shook her head, then nodded, "I can't remember anything past that jail cell. I think that constitutes as a problem." "Man you guys walk fast," Will said catching up ...

(Oh XD that makes it a little harder for me to put my intro in if everyone's still here...Guess what? I'm in Rohan now! Somebody find me!)

*I'm still confused!!!!! *cowers*

Caiden felt like a slut for a moment, was she in love with both these people at the same time? PArt of her hoped not. *All I got*

(Billy! Your turn or I shall bite you!)

"Yeah," he said "As a matter of fact I would. I've known Caiden my whole life, I love her. I'm making sure she's safe."

(Um....I missed like last night and now I'm more than a little behind, where are we?)

Pretty! (It's Italian-that form I think...not sure! Alice

The chorus sounds a little akward towards the end. That's all I could find. I like the thought, it's kinda like the songs I write, not in rythmic pattern or ...

I liked it, it was very confusing though. I loved the vivid imagery though.

This is very origional! Being origional is hard to do anymore. It was a little repetitive with the "maybe it's just me" line but it didn't make it annoying. It ...

10/10 yeah Monty Python!

(I like Tony's idea, I was just gonna have my character get lonely and try to go find someone)