Alice

Ride along little bobbin, don't even look up from your game. Don't you realize what you're missing? Don't you see the wonders outside your window? The trees seem endless, tall ...

I liked this, it had a good rythm and had good termonology. My only problem was it didn't do anything for me . Poetry is supposed to not only move ...

special and... and I know that You said and twice, it throws off the flow a tad I think. Do you see the trance that I am in? Sounds better ...

(Maki>>oh...um....I don't know what to do then >.

(I've determined Zoe looks like she's 20) Zoe Being a vampire had its perks, like free ipods and such. Which was good for Zoe, she had a habit of breaking ...

I'd assume so ^_^

Caiden She knew she wasn't going to be that graceful on the way down the fire excape. She kept Tristian cradled to her chest and even removed her shoes to ...

Neither can the cheese sticks!

Caiden "Out the fire escape." *sorry >.

*bows* only I

Caiden "Because I am the one who brought Caiden back from the dead, and led her back home." Caiden gasped. "W-y-you did?"

I joined ^_^ Guess what my character is guys?

Caiden "What are we going to do then? Fighting them is why it all blew up last time." "We're...I don't know what we're going to do." "Come with me," the ...

Zoe 250 Vampire only a lot more pale I'm not sure about her personality or her history yet, I'll let that form on its own.

Caiden I held onto Colts waist with one hand and carressed Tristian's face with the other. They needed to stay calm, but she was sure that wouldn't be an easy ...