Alice

So, while I'm not a fan of this poem, I want to be. I can see the great poem in here, and hope I can help bring it out. And ...

One of the many joys of poetry is subtly, mostly with the rhymes. The rhymes here are so sing-songey that it almost hurts. try lengthening out the phrases so that ...

It was a bright and colorful day, the blues were a glowing cerulean, and the greens were almost neon, all the colors seemed to glow. I lounged on the grass ...

Well, this took me by surprise. Congradulations, not very many things can do that! Trust me too, it was a good surprise. I like how it rambles and the whole ...

Well, this took me by surprise. Congradulations, not very many things can do that! Trust me too, it was a good surprise. I like how it rambles and the whole ...

A show about an amusement park run by teenagers, definitely a drama parody Shut The Duck Up

Everyone and by everyone i mean everyone who recognizes the difference between races is racist. Simply because they recognize the difference in race makes you racist. Simple fact. Everyone makes ...

I like this a lot, I've only got one thing to pick on "Gandhi once remarked that an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind, but if we’re ...

Not much of a poem, but a ~fantastic~ raw idea. I love it. I think if you expanded on this a little it would be brilliant, just add some imagery ...

I'd really like this picture if the sky was softer colors, they're too intense and harsh that it kinda detracts from the composition and basic beauty of the silhouette you've ...

I kind of agree with Paladin...and by kind of I mean really. I think what happened here was you had a small idea and tried to make it big. Small ...

Heh, that's pretty cool. I should get back on here more often....

Zombie's not my thing but I love the cover art!

Lol, that wasn't really the whole point, but I suppose it could be.

The Colors Don’t take away the colors because some of them aren’t so pretty. We live our lives for the colors. We are the colors, both beautiful and bad. Bohemia ...