Alfreto

I'm usually not that great at poetry and try to stray away from it, but these are a few I wrote for school and though they actually turned out good ...

I agree with the critic above. You have a really neat plot going on here, but it seems a bit rushed. I like the conflict you have with the boyfriend's ...

This story is written differently than what most writters like to make it. But when I say, "different", I mean different in a good way. I liked it. You written ...

To answer everyones questions all the stories are different with different characters. The only simulartity they have is their meaning twords the song. I was told that I should put ...

This story is based off of the song Chasing Cars by Snow Patrol. I placed some of the lyrics in the story and they should be in italics if it ...

I don't know if I put these poems in the right category because I'm not much of a poet. But I had to write eighty lines of poetry for school ...

I didn't read your first one, but your new one is really good :) I like your created world (really creative!) Your story line was amazing and very interesting to ...

ok first of all I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading this and honestly did not expect that twist in the end ! but there was some ...

I completely see where your coming from =] Love is amazing but there will heartbreak. I think theres a point after awhile when your with the right person you'll know. ...

Hey I'm Alyson and I will be your reviewer today =] This is a cute little poem; I loved it !!!! It was rather short, but alot of poems are ...

Hey I'm Alyson =] I'll get to the critical stuff first. “I’m sorry, Beth. Will you forgive me?” He says, his dark brown eyes digging holes into mine. Ok I'm ...

Part One It was seven O’clock in the morning when Sarah woke me up that day. My head aching, and my eyes still heavy with sleep, I forced myself to ...

Hi, I noticed you were new here so welcome to YWS ! I haven't really heard of the book or movie of Edward Masen, but I'm getting the idea that ...

Hey I'm Alyson, and I'm sorry I don't have that long to do a full review, but I can tell you right now that this is really really good. From ...

Ok the only two things I noticed is that around the center of your story you statred saying "before" alot. Maybe it wasn't that much, but it was starting to ...