Alexwriter

I really liked this. The enjambment was effective and it was really emotive. I loved the last stanza. It's really interesting however it's not consistent with the amount of lines ...

Chapter One I could see my breath when I exhaled. It was the white transparent color that always makes it seem as if an unknown life-force has just left your ...

Silence is golden; she should be rich Too lame to meet; too unknown to ditch She’s so outdated, a waste of space She’s the nerdy girl with blackheads on her ...

Chapter 1 “FANG!” I SCREAMED, striving to save the love of my life. Just a little farther, Max…You can reach him, This should be in italics I lied to myself. ...

I loved this poem. Not liked LOVED :D

I loved it. You judge yourself too harshly. It was beautifully written, emotional and powerful. Keep posting :)

This is the edited version after I got some tips from a comment I would always cry as a kid. Over anything and everything. That’s why they chose me. The ...

This summed love up really well. It was well-written and it paints a picture of the characters without the need for names or descriptions, which is something rare. I love ...

Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow Chapter 1: Unexpected Who’d have thought that this would happen to a guy like me? Who’d have thought that a knife would be pointed right at ...

2 Dawn broke over the horizon as Gray, Lothe and Scott were led out with the other prisoners into a giant arena, a colosseum, where cheering people surrounded them. Anarchists, ...

I liked this poem. The way you wrote the dialogue seemed a little awkward and I think that%u2019s the charm of it, really. It captures the awkwardness of love (not ...

HAHAHA I thought I was in for a sombre poem but that last line had me laughing :) I could rant about the way it flowed etc but really it ...

1 The time up to the field mission seemed to flit by as a blur. Lilith and Ember started training with Scott and Cleaver. Scott was growing uncomfortable with the ...

I LOVED this series. However i thought it ended so happily and tidily that it was too different to the sombre atmosphere created for the entire series. I also thought ...

The best book I have read (recently at least) is The Book Thief. It's unusual for me because my genre is usually supernatural/paranormal/fantasy, but this was set in Nazi Germany ...