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Re: Witchlight- Chapter 3
The stars glittered in the dim sky and I found myself wondering if they watched me. My mother once told me that when people died and went to heaven, they ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Best Friend..yeah right
When we first met each other, we were naive and very young. The two of us were different , This doesn't feel quite right but we always had fun. This ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Witchlight- Chapter 2
My head throbbed like a heavy bass as I awoke on Jo’s couch, tears pouring down my face . Memories. So many awful memories. I wiped away the tears with ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Touch of Death Chapter 1
“Yeah everything’s fine, but I have to go now sorry. I’ll see you after school tomorrow Ellie?” He didn’t wait for my reply, and instead half walked – half ran ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Never Grow Up
This story was so touching that I have goosebumps right now! I love how it was written and the way the characters were portrayed. It shows that despite their youth, ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: No More
This was a good piece of writing and don't worry, most writers dislike their work (I know I do) but anywho the middle of the night is when I'm most ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Witchlight- Chapter 1
I was burning. A scream erupted from my lips and it felt like my blood was turning to fire. A strange scent filled my nose, sickly sweet. My arms glowed, ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Playlist Expired
This was good for such a short poem. However, if you have punctuation at the end of a line, the first letter of the next line should be a capital. ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: The Bitter Pain
This was a beautiful poem and it really was relatable. Keep up all the good work :)
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: The Dream Snatcher
This was very well written and other than grammatical errors (which have already been pointed out) I couldn't find much fault with it. I would have liked a bit more ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Down Below- Chapter 4
The next few weeks had the two assassins settling into a routine. Ari would lead them from their cells after breakfast each morning and lead them out to the fields ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: ~This Tree is Me~
This was beautiful, haunting and so wonderfully written. It' an amazing piece of work. Though it did leave me questioning HOW she became a tree but that is a small ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Remember me
At first it was difficult to settle into the dialect but, once i did, it was easy to imagine this slightly unhinged woman. I found this piece funny because of ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: I Am A Little Fly
Hahaha this is cute :)
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: An Abyss of Blue
Ok I'm officially a fan! You're really quite talented and paint a great image. The flow needs a bit of a tweak but otherwise it was a wonderful piece of ...
Apr 27, 2011
