AlexT

Haha when I read the first bit, I instantly thought of Peter Pan and the Lost Boys. Anyway... The first paragraph was perhaps the thing that caught my attention the ...

Mmmm...I really enjoyed the poem! It had a nice, breezy feel to it. It was well paced as well, and with a satisfying end. I must was indeed well titled. ...

I liked it! The ending kind of died off because it didn't end in a rhyme, but otherwise, it was really good. Funny too.

"Shut up," I mouthed. No. Make me the hero and I'll consider it. I twisted a hair around my finger, deep in thought. I was starting a new story, but ...

I like it! Maybe a little bit overboard on the language, but still, I like it! The song really puts things into perspective-- the emotions the girl was feeling. All ...

I must say..the topic is what really caught my attention. The steady bounce of rhymes enticed me as well. I thought what you put into the poem was meaningful--there were ...

Short and sweet. It hand a nice bouncing rhyme to it, which I really enjoyed. I'm usually not much a poetry type of person, but I must say...this was really ...

Brief, but spectacular. I think the essence of not having much beef actually adds it. I liked how you italicized certain parts. I especially liked how everything was clear. It ...

The cloaked figure waited patiently on the rooftop. He had time. Plenty of time. His dark hood covered his face, as well as perhaps his most striking feature--his eyes. He ...

Two words...awesome beginning! I loved the overall idea of the story -- an approaching enemy tribe. Actually, I just love the idea of elves in general. The way you arranged ...

I love this! It has a mysterious feel to it, and it took a little while to understand what was really going on. But-as the story progressed, things became more ...

The thief was burly. He was intimidating. But sadly for him, he wasn’t very bright. He was just looking for a way to get rich quick. He didn’t care how ...