AlexMc

I say depends on which audience you're targeting with this specific piece. If you're going to get graphic and there is a chance a child who isn't up to date ...

Sounds good though confused me a little using the reference of a road then island and then river then back to the road. I liked it though, look forward to ...

Good story so far. Though some parts I don't entirely agree with but I don't dislike them enough to bring them up. All I can say is I saw a ...

I see everything pointed out so I will just give my opinion on your prologue. I have to say you get better more into the story and so that works ...

Hey all, thanks for the welcome. to answer and reply to most of you. YES Australia! Also I am from New South Wales. To Rosey, Meh I just don't see ...

I'll be posting it when I get more known in the community and review quite a bit more. I have actually only done 3 or 4 pages so far so ...

I think Chey sounds good, not that I have anything against your full name, it will just be easier and shorter to remember. Yes, I have fallen for that trap ...

Two cents? Ah guess I've already been picked up on. For a while? Yes, you can say that. Though I don't think I have gotten good up until half way ...

Once again we meet, but I do not know your name yet? Here, let me try my best to answer your questions. It's a good thing you have it planned, ...

Hi there Nutty, good to see a quick reply :P And for you to know, yes I have read up on the rules and already began putting my two sense ...

Hi there Kevzta, I have to say, this is a good piece of writing. I only picked up on a few mistakes. The thing that got me was the storyline ...

Hi there, before you ask. Yes, I am new to this forum. I figured after posting my introduction I would post the storyline of a series I am undertaking. I ...

Hi there, my name is Alex. A friend you could say referred me to this forum saying it is a better place to be so here I am ! Well ...