AlexMc

Yeah doesn't really need critique but opinions so hope this doesn't conflict with the 2 reviews per post (If that is still her) :? . But yeah just got an ...

Sounds quite good however you just gave it away =P But yeah good luck with it and look forward to seeing you post it up to read. Also like the ...

Listen to the song 'Love Story' by taylor swift and fit that stuff into there somehow =P

Hey guys, Has been awhile since I was last on here. Thinking of returning from my break of writing and giving it another go. My writing/critiquing might be a bit ...

Thank you Chey, and Ethan for your comments. Much appreciated. Nutty, I will try and clear some things up with you to begin with. I do have to say your ...

Yeah only a couple places in which it snows in down here. Usually hot but at the moment.. I think it is going to rain. How is it over in ...

Well what has me going is what the bloody hell does this Terrence turn into? Until I have this answered I will be in suspense wanting to see more. How ...

I think this suits PG but I might be wrong.. Anyway, This is after my prologue or chapter one. I didn't want to post that because it is a bit ...

I had someone refer me [Shadowbox] :X

Heart of the cards.. The dark magician! I had to include that preference for no reason.. Anyway. I have to say Nutty is my choice. She has helped me with ...

Write what you like. I am neutral to this storyline as of yet. It can go in a good way or a bad. It is up to you to decide ...

Three simple words: I like it. :X

I enjoyed this to. Shows the things she is dealing with in life and how such small things can affect a person. It could have been spread out more though, ...

I personally think this is a rather stupid question. perhaps smoking next to a non smoker in real life could offend them, but personally, if it is in a book ...

I hope this isn't another cliché dragon story. If it isn't I look forward to reading it. Good luck with the names though, millions of different ways to get a ...