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Re: The rose’s thorns
This is a really good poem but you could use a thesaurus , the language is very basic and a few mistakes with homophones (their instead of they're) it good ...
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Re: What were the Chances?
Really great, amazing actually. My favorite part was the running away part . You're a truly amazing poet, keep going!
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 1: Part 2
Great!!! This was really amazing!
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: The Poisonous Phone
Natalia had finally bult up the courage to talk to Isabella, one of her ex-close friends. Ever since Natalia had come back from Germany, she realized how shallow Isabella, and ...
Sep 17, 2011