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Re: It Doesn't Matter
Hi, Your story is very emotional and touching. I like it how you use descriptive adjectives and adverbs to show feelings. The only thing I would change - I would ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Incorrigible mistake
There are no perfect people. Everyone has their own weak points. Each person knows it, but not everyone accepts it. Along with, in some cases it can cause irreversible and ...
Feb 2, 2010
