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Re: Twins of Volengrad, Ch. 1
I liked it. You described things well. By well, I mean that you might want to finish some of your sentences. For example: He watched it lick the still intact ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: City Of Love | Chapter 1
One thing I like about this is that it has a lot of dialogue. Dialogue is important, but how they feel and what they are doing is also important. We ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Twitterized)
I laughed when I read this. It was funny and I really liked it. Harry's a bit occ, but I like it best when he is.
Jul 31, 2011